I think that the Star system went a lot better this time. Although I only got two reviews, what they had to say and help with was very helpful to me. I enjoy as much peer review as I can get, this way I know how everyone else is viewing my paper. What makes sense to me most of the time doesn’t for others.
Finding an outsider to read my paper was a bit challenging. In my family I am a bit of an outcast. I am the only one that enjoy’s reading and writing, everyone else is hands on math and science people. I finally had to ask a person in my Literature class because I wasn’t receiving any kind of good feedback from family.
The person that did my “outside” review was a bit confused at first as to why I didn’t put more information in about why I choose the Tropes that I did, and the he also said that my use of “shankapotomus” was a bit overwhelming. Which I agree, but to me it seems like one of the main themes in the commercial…I am not sure how I am going to minimize the use of the word.
